Date: 2012-07-18 06:40 pm (UTC)
muccamukk: Jaime's family laughing and hugging him. (DC: Family hugs!)
From: [personal profile] muccamukk
Great story. The Mercies were very effectively creepy, and a great plot device for vanishing years of canon.

I really liked how you played out Booster's messed up memories, and how they filtered in with what happened in your canon. The scene where he was freaking out about Max was very well done.

Great characterisation all around.
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